Friday, December 5, 2008


The young boy's main problem is that the boy wants to carve elephant. For example, when he asked the man to teach him how to carve elephant. Another example is when the man said I can't teach you how to carve elephant can teach you how to carve stones. A third example is when they wen out to chisel the stones. Clearly, The young boy's main problem is that the boy wants to carve elephant.


They solved the problem by getting stones. For example when they went to the river to get stones. Another example is when they started to chisel the stones. A third example is when the man told him to look at the three stones. Clearly, The problem by getting stone.


What I think is that the boy is going to sell elephant just like the man. A example, is when he saw the tiger in the stone and went home to set the tiger free. Another example is when they gathered a lot of stones to take to the man's house. A third example, is when they spent a lot of time chiseling the stones. Clearly, What I think is that the boy is going to sell elephant just like the man.

5 comments:

Jesus 605 said...

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

Mahamadou 605 said...

dear,kelvin i like story cause it have a lot picture matches with your story and when you gave detials.

Arlie 605 said...

Dear kelvin,
I like your story because it explained what the story is about.

Eugene 605 said...

Dear Kelvin

I like your blog post because it has a lot of details from the story. The best part of your essay is the 3 details. One suggestion I have is to write more.

From, Eugene

Amy 605 said...

Dear kelvin,

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

sincerely amy ortz